Our task was to make a Sensory poem about Lock down.
I found it easy because we had to think about senses we had during lock down but is was hard to put our words into more detailed word and make them into a poem.
Next time I will add more detail to my poem and add more sentences.
I love this poem because I can picture all of these things, they are all common to me too :)
ReplyDeleteI like that you identified the need to add more detail your sentences. I agree with you, I think if you added some more detail or descriptive language your sentences would be more powerful.
Great work Kyla!