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Friday 13 November 2020

Creative Writing

 

This week in room 5 we have been learning how to write a story with the mood of nervousness but we are not allowed to say "I was nervous" we had to create the mood nervousness using language features such a verbs and similes this was a very fun pices of writing here it is.


When I started walking on the stage I started to stutter and shake, my face turned red and my palms were dripping sweat, I did not know what was going on or what I was going to say, I stood in complete silence while the crowd stared into my soul like it was a deep dark pit of frightfulness, The lights started to shine right on me I felt like I was about to explode I was shaking with fear as words just started spitting out of my mouth people were laughing their heads of and I was thinking what my speech was meant to be serious not a stand up show? I felt so ashamed with butterflies flapping around my stomach,  my heart dropped to the ground. I freezed for at least 10 seconds. I could not hear , see or smell anything


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