Aloha Kyla, Amaya here from Te Waka Ako in Waikowhai primary School. I found your blog post nice because you told us what the google drawing was. I also liked your post because you made the poster look cool. Have you thought about telling us more of what you did like a summary. Over all you did really well. If you would like to see my blog here is the address wpsamayap.blogspot.co.nz
Aloha Kyla, My name is Chloe King, I really like the poster and the animal the animal is really cute. Did you think about maybe putting more information into your post? Maybe you could say it is a class pet? Is the otter a class pet? Is it a otter? I hope had fun making the blog post. Chloe King Yaldhurst Model School
Aloha Kyla,
ReplyDeleteAmaya here from Te Waka Ako in Waikowhai primary School. I found your blog post nice because you told us what the google drawing was. I also liked your post because you made the poster look cool. Have you thought about telling us more of what you did like a summary.
Over all you did really well.
If you would like to see my blog here is the address
wpsamayap.blogspot.co.nz
He its Kyla great feedback I will remember for next time.
ReplyDeleteAloha Kyla,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chloe King,
I really like the poster and the animal the animal is really cute.
Did you think about maybe putting more information into your post?
Maybe you could say it is a class pet?
Is the otter a class pet?
Is it a otter?
I hope had fun making the blog post.
Chloe King
Yaldhurst Model School